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inuyasha looking on to kagome and shippou and thinking (this is done in Inu's POV)
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Inu Character thougths (one shots)
(#) InuKag 2006-03-26
I like this.. its sweet, but.. there are some words missing within some of the sentences... and there are some misspellings.. im sure that its only because its on here, but though i am not articulate enough to really pay any mind to grammical errors, spelling is one thing that could throw some people off.Inu Character thougths (one shots)
(#) Ithilwen 2006-03-26
"from hell," "verbally," etc. You have minor editing issues in here.
Also, is Inuyasha smart or articulate enough to think these things you have him thinking? In these words?Inu Character thougths (one shots)
(#) ellyse_the_silent 2006-04-06
I'm not sure that this is in character for Inu-Yasha. The centered format is a little confusing.
Interesting though.
-ellyse-
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