(#) gunsandpocky 2005-08-13articulate, intelligent and mysterious. i particularly like the contrast between the ataraxic tone of the piece and the rather haunting passion that underlies it. the characters were very well-drawn, i thought - i can see their originals from the anime, but this adds depth and interest to them. i have to save this, because i know i'd like to read it again - possibly several times. thank you!
(#) miskatonic 2005-08-29I've a powerful need to see these two together (slashed :), and this worked fine for me for that purpose. Tres not human, Abel oddly human as always. Is lovely.
(Incidentally, re: "“If I was a golem.” This is one of those instances that takes the subjunctive + conditional: "If I were a golem, I would should could.")
- i just love abel/tres stories.this one was really sweet.my only regret is that tres is so...robotish all the time.of course i know he can't help it.but it would be nice to see a more feeling side of tres.i know it's there somewhere and who better to bring it out than abel?
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