- I love how it's Cloud and Cid at the Chocobo Races and I like Cloud's nervousness upon entering a new class.
I love how Teioh has such a personality of his own and how Joe does as well. Your writing is very clean and I like your dialogue.
Author\'s Response: Thank you. For some reason, of all the characters in the game, Joe's become the most prominent presence in my brain. It's wacky. I'm possibly the only one in the world hoping they upgrade it for PS3 so we can have upgraded Joe graphics. lol
- Heh. Amusing.
Chocobo racing: Because even heroes need a hobby. It might have been funny to have some reference to the big evil meteor in the sky when Cid asked what there was to worry about.
Author\'s Response: I thought about the meteor reference, but I didn't want to bog it down with too many subreferences given the length or lack there of.Still, very glad it amused.
Sign up to review this story.