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Amazing Pain
8 reviews"I wonder if this world has ever known peace. Is it foolishness that makes men dedicate their lives the fallacy of peace, or simply a man's despreate need for a greater good?"
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Lord of War
(#) Cateagle 2009-03-20
Well, it's definitely getting interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops. You do need a beta, though, as some typos get through. The most amusing one was "...neigh-impossible..." which should be "...nigh-impossible...".Lord of War
(#) marshall88 2009-03-20
to reviewing to tell you i'm reading it and am looking forward to the storty because of the pairing and will tell you how it is coming on later.Lord of War
(#) marshall88 2009-03-20
just reviewing to tell you i'm reading it and am looking forward to the storty because of the pairing and will tell you how it is coming on later.Lord of War
(#) Vukk 2009-03-20
I think you have it a little off in your thinking of Draco. He might be above average in power, but Albus, Tom, and Harry are out of his league in power. You said Batman and the Joker, Goku and Vageta, Superman and Luthor. I believe it would be more like Batman and Joker's 2nd in command, Goku and Vageta's "friend" Nappa, and Superman and Luthor's assistant (without Kryptonite). Given time and the right situation, they are a menace but not on the level as Vageta, Luthor, or the Joker.
Curious to see how Hermione and Harry interact. You have me thinking it is Moody and Crouch, which was it?Lord of War
(#) lysander 2009-03-21
what is your idea of the e-mail or the im i sent lysander is brian
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(#) HJHOWE 2009-05-05
So far so good. Beliviabble plot lines. Need a BETA?
I lke your comments on the minds of young men, bulls-eyed that one. Add five years of prison and any lady ends up in Harry's bed' going to walk funny the next day!
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