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The Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) Cateagle 2009-03-22
Okay, you dropped him into ST continuity right where I suspected you might from the title. From the comments to McCoy, I take it that this is more or less immediately after the evnts of "City on the Edge of Forever". It should be rather interesting to see Harry learning and growing in the far future before he returns to his present. Meanwhile, he'll need to find out just how much is known about the magical world in this time (could probably make for some interesting data serches on his part). All in all, it's developign quite nicely.Author's response
Your pretty much dead on with how I have this planned out. All I can really say at this point, without giving a lot of things away, is that if you can imagine what might going on with the command cadets just before Saavik goes into the bridge simulator to take the Kobiashi Maru test, That's where this whole this is going to end. About 5 minutes before the start of Star Trek II.The Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) The_Resident 2009-03-22
An interesting start. I look forward to where you take this. Oh, BTW, you've titled both chapters as 1. and it confuses the site. I have added you to my alerts so I don't miss any of the upcoming chapters.Author's response
nope I didn't intentionally title both of them chapter one. somehow they got that way without my input.
Sorry about that
RobThe Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) Wonderbee31 2009-03-31
Great section here, and can't wait to see what this will mean as time goes on here. With Harry in here after the ep with the Guardian, I'd wager Kirk is feeling more that a bit raw at the moment, but can't wait to see what happens as Harry adjusts to his new life, and what happens as he grows up in a much different world than usual.The Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) dennisud 2009-04-10
I think you missed the boat on one thing here, imagine the interplay that would happen IF Hermione had also journeyed with harry here.
Maybe a divergent story in the future might give you a new direction to follow.
dennisudAuthor's response
To be honest, I hadn't considered having another character, such as Hermione, come through with Harry. I may have to write another story exploring this possibility. I will admit that the characters in the books will show up eventually, but it will be a while before they make appearances aside from memories and allusions.
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(#) paulblay 2009-06-26
Another good chapter. I liked seeing the "magic doesn't mix with technology well" bit used properly for once. Many fanfiction authors either ignore it entirely or have Harry/Hermione develop 'technomagic' within a couple of chapters ;-)
The Guardian of Time was a very good choice for the 'retrieval' half of the plot, and Harry seems to have got very good at lying rather quickly.
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