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The Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) DrT 2009-03-27
Interesting; it should be very interesting to see what you come up with next!The Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) Cateagle 2009-03-27
I love that tribble/puffskin link and it seems quite plausible (at least as much as any other treknology). I do like the way Harry's growing in that time and I rather suspect he's going to be quite a surprise to a number of folk at such time as he finds a way to return. I thought that Kirk leveling with him was a very nice touch on the Captain's part and I hope the friendly relationship continues there. I rather suspected that Gorn would be related to parseltongue; 'twould be amusing to see Harry carrying a perfect conversation with one or more Gorns. I'm definitely looking forward to where you take matters next, though I suspect Harry's going to be in the prep school for Starfleet Academy.Author's response
Well, your reading my mind again. He will eventually be going to the Academy, but he does have to finish High School first. Gorn will pop up again in time as will Ensign Krulak. Keep on reading.
RobThe Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) Elfwyn 2009-03-27
Very nicely done. The only thing missing is why Harry isn't nervous about where he will go after leaving Enterprise. Other than that Cateagle said it all.Author's response
Harry's had 6 weeks aboard the Enterprise and in that time he's been about to find out that the federation makes sure that Orphaned kids are taken care of properly with education and a proper home to live until the age of majority. So while it will be different for him as far as he knows its going to a million times better than the Dursleys
RobThe Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) grookill 2009-03-27
Very interesting. I think I've seen one or two other Trek crossovers but this is the first one with TOS.
At this point Harry's personality should lead him to Starfleet Academy.
One thing though... since this is 250 years in the future, I take it Voldemort isn't around? Or is it more along the lines of "he's not worth worrying about."
Last thought for the moment... personally I'd like to keep Harry on the Enterprise for a bit longer if you can. Please though, don't turn him into a Wesley Crusher.Author's response
Nope no Crusherization for Harry. Your on the right track for the Academy. As for Voldemort, don't worry, ol' snakeface will be addressed in the future.
RobThe Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) Vilkath 2009-03-28
Interesting concept and I do hope Harry finds a way continue his magical education, even if organized wizards and witches as he knew it on earth don't really exist anymore. Be a shame to just simply forget about magic from now on because it would blow up the many eletronics around him in the high tech world.
It's a fair start so far and I can't help but wonder where it could go from here. Will Harry play some important role in the Star Trek universe now, or will he continue on into the future of perhaps next generation, voyager etc? So far he's been pretty well grounded in his schooling and basic education of techonlgy durring his stay on the enterprise but little else of real merit.
IT would be really funny if Harry and wizards in general have something to with the Q, like say large scale magical comunity being wiped out all in an instant by the nukes.. converted all that magical energy into the higher beings known as Q.Author's response
Magic wont be forgotten by Harry, he's going to have some interesting ways to work around technology though. Magical society becoming the Q? Interesting concept, but not where I'm heading with this one. Please keep reading though.
RobThe Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) fopalup 2009-03-28
Does the Enterprise get back to Earth? Will Harry ever get a passing grade in History? Does Peter start crawling through the Jeffries tubes for 'fun'? Will Ron get away from Harry long enough to start breeding? Find out next time, on 'Harry Potter; Time-crossed, magically-charged, Chosen One!' Oh and hopefully a mention of the magic world too.
This is good. Keep it up!Author's response
LOL! love the teaser for the next episode ^_^
Magic will be there and will play a part of the story. Keep on reading.
RobThe Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) brigrove 2009-03-28
Interesting and original, I look forward to moreThe Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) Wonderbee31 2009-03-31
Great part here, and for one thing, really lkiked the idea of Peter Kirk here, as he was only in the one ep, and then basically dropped out of Trek continuity. It was good to see Harry take him under his wing, and will be curious as to what will happen if and when he goes to Academy. Excellent writing, and can't wait for the next part.The Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) dennisud 2009-04-10
Interesting story and having him going around in the 23rd century will be fun, but again that same accident might caught up a fellow witch or wizard to make things interesting!
Too bad Q or Trellane aren't there!
dennisudAuthor's response
Oh if I could get Trellane or Q in this without going completely off track, I'd do it. Unfortunately, It's not in the cards this time around.
Harry will eventually be coming in contact with the Wizarding world, but its going to be a bit before it occurs. However, no wizards or witches from his time will be coming from the 1990's to help out Harry.
RobThe Wizard on the Edge of Forever
(#) jasonthereader 2009-07-07
The idea of this kind of plot seems great! To be honest though, your story is well beyond boring.
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