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Thoughts on a Relationship

by lovetah 4 reviews

you did everything for me but when I asked, you wouldn't stop.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres:  - Published: 2009-04-02 - Updated: 2009-04-02 - 184 words

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I said ‘wish me good luck’, but you had already made sure I would suceed.
I said ‘call me’, but you were already standing outside my door.
I said ‘convince me’, but you already had me following you.
I said ‘daze me’, but you had already made me sway.
I said ‘help me’, but you had already grasped my hand.
I said ‘look at me’, but you were already staring deep into my eyes.
I said ‘hold me’, but you had already caught me up in a smothering hug.
I said ‘kiss me’, but your lips were already on mine.
I said ‘touch me’, but you were already ravaging me.
I said ‘save me’, but you had already placed your life into my hands.
I said ‘love me’, but you had already slipped the ring on my finger.
I said ‘leave me’, but you were already out of my sight.

I asked “Do you want to…?” and you didn’t know what to say.

I said ‘kill me’, but the knife was already pressed against my throat.


I said ‘stop’, but you didn’t.
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