(#) nadialexandra 2009-04-06Holehh sheet.
Well, Gerard, it's all downhill from there. You've confessed unknowingly, screwed yourself over and now you're going to get jail time for life. You should've just stuck with Death Row.
And Bob? It's nice to see his [sex] life is getting better. That "drummers can do multiple things with multiple limbs" thing was hilarious. x]
Bob, can I have breakfast in bed? ;D
(#) thegayestgoth 2009-04-11OH. SHIT.
"we can't make unauthorized recordings of you without your knowledge."
my jaw dropped. i...i couldn't believe it. gerard talked himself into a corner. twice. once with the doc and once with the ghosts of frank and ray.
HO. LEE. SH. IT.
gerard, you should've kept your mouth shut, dumbass.
and i loved the "four limbs" line. that was so beautiful, how they fell in love, how bob's life is finally starting to turn around after all os this trauma.
they really got gerard. "you were tied up for seventeen days? and you mean between all of the interviews and shows, you couldn't make one call to the police? not even one?"
ooh. EPIC BURN.
this is fantastic. how do you know so much about the coury system? i went to jail for a month, so i totally gtt his story.
god, this would make an excellent motion picture.
Author's responseLOL! Glad you're enjoying it!
I know nothing about the court system, especially in America - I just do a lot of research. I'm sure I still get stuff wrong, but I try :)
(#) thegayestgoth 2009-04-11like niggas say.
i had to go get surgery, my jaw popped out of it's hinges.
dis mothafucka done talked his ass into a corner!!! not once, but twice!!! damn, nigga!!! shut cho' ass up!!! once admitting everything to ghosts. ghosts!
and i loved the "four limbs" line. i'm so glad bob is getting some happiness after all this trauma. he deserves it, and they deserve each other. it's so beautiful, it made me cry, when bob saw her naked body and was happy.
and as for gerard, welll homeboy, talk yo'self outta this one, nigga. no mo' slick rick.
this should be a motion picture. i'd camp out three days before the premier.
- Hi there Sas,
I feel so horrible having not been able to read & review properly.
I really loved this chapter.
It was great to see Bob and Lisa making the relationship official and like every one else love the line about drummers ability to do different things with all four limbs. But I think it's the fifth one she's more concerned about LOL!!
I loved how Frank made him confess again. They really are doing a number on him. I also enjoyed reading the flashback of the trial.
On to the next chapter.
Author's responseDon't feel bad! We all have times when we can't log on for one reason or another.
Yeah, it looked as though Gerard was getting the better of Frank, but it was all a trick to make him gloat and finally confess.
Thanks for reviewing and I'm really pleased you're enjoying it.
ps - the drummer thing - it's true! ;)
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-06-01Ha ha the ending..was..AMAZING! Gerard was totally tricked..I LUFF GHOSTS! Or whatever Ray and Frankie are...and yeah, the drumming thing? I've heard it too..and its funny, actually, cos the guy that I like..is. A. Drummer..XD
Well! On to the next chapter!!
Author's responseYeah, poor G - he didn't see that coming!
Thanks for reviewing again!
Sign up to review this story.