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Part 2: Arashi's Tale

by MarkPoa 1 review

Kenishi's in danger. His only hope is his loving wife, Arashi. There's more to this lady than meets the eye.

Category: Sci-Fi - Rating: PG - Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Parody, Romance, Sci-fi - Published: 2006-03-28 - Updated: 2006-03-28 - 7102 words

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FAQing Hostile: The Sword and the Sheath

(#) fruit_addict 2007-03-19

That was a great story. You need to watch your tenses though. You switched from past to present alot.
Author's response
Thanks. I'll have to look into that. This work was an experiment in first-person writing, so I may have botched it a few times. :)

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