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Harry Potter and the Endwar Project
(#) juggler196 2009-04-19
I like it. Not the best i've read, but i'd definitely give it a B+. I think that you gave enough of a history in the first to give a good background and, while not necessary by any means, a more detailed history would add more to the story.
The plot/story-line seems to be going along pretty good, and i like how harry doesn't seem to be involved with hogwarts in any way so far and is instead choosing to work 'behind the scenes' (which is what the Unspeakables job seems to be).
Good story overall and i hope that you choose to continue it. Feel free to ask me for any help that you need, as i have a fair amount of free time right now.Harry Potter and the Endwar Project
(#) hptrump 2009-04-19
Is Harry nieve enough that he would think that Dumbledore would not change things back as soon as he found them messed up. Only solution is permanent solutions.Harry Potter and the Endwar Project
(#) grookill 2009-04-19
I just read the last few chapters and they are pretty good. It seems the story is following the basic adventure and spy stories I used to read a long time ago.
Malfoy shouldn't be THAT hard to cause problems for... he does have a horcrux hidden somewhere and that should count for something. He'll be able to escape that but having it exposed will annoy him.
Good luck with the rest of the story!
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