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Opening Gambits
30 reviewsEveryone makes their first moves at Hogwarts; not all are successful.
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A Fist Full of Galleons
(#) DrT 2009-04-23
PS -- for forestall complaints; Snape is not 'good'; he's just useful!A Fist Full of Galleons
(#) pi3142 2009-04-23
And just because he is useful doesn't mean he can't die a horrible and embarrassing death...A Fist Full of Galleons
(#) DJ32 2009-04-23
Nice update I like this Harry even if DD is an A*S I like how they are working at the meoment. Also to quote Pi " And just because he is useful doesn't mean he can't die a horrible and embarrassing death" Can I ask for that to happen? Please thanks for writing.A Fist Full of Galleons
(#) mathiasgranger 2009-04-23
Amusing how two half bloods have very high leadership positions in the pureblood movement, isn't it (Snape and Voldemort)?
I don't understand how the Gryffindors can be so obtuse and retarded, but I suppose it could be due to many years of intermarriage. Perhaps only the truly extraordinary can overcome the condition?
Thanks for writing,
MattA Fist Full of Galleons
(#) jjracer24 2009-04-23
Great stuff, I like that you have Harry being a little more calm and collected, not so hot headed. Keep up the good work and I'll be waiting eagerly for the next update.A Fist Full of Galleons
(#) Cateagle 2009-04-23
Yes, I can see how Snape could be considered a "willing tool", but that's about the most I can see him being and that doesn't not eliminate the possibility of removal when the tool can do no more. -chuckle- I'll agree with Matt about the amusement factor, there. 'Twill be interesting to see the reaction if/when the full story comes out. Meanwhile, I do like the way things are building between Harry & Hermione in a subtle and slow manner; it'll last longer and build stronger that way.
I thought the initial part of the discussion with DUmbledore was amusing as Harry had to point out to him the clauses that'd allow removal of Umbridge et al. I can't wait to see the Ministry's reaction to being legally removed.A Fist Full of Galleons
(#) erik 2009-04-23
Another well written chapter, with extra points for the junior DE meeting. Thanks.A Fist Full of Galleons
(#) Elfwyn 2009-04-23
Why is Harry being so open with the Headmaster about the Horcruxes? Why tell him at all? It is not like the OoTP is actually effective. It seems to me the group or groups that trained Harry would have been a better bet and let AD stew.A Fist Full of Galleons
(#) Treck 2009-04-23
Ok I've read the chapter and the opening review statements by you...
Doesn't casting Crucio on Draco make him good? Well... Maybe not. But it sure felt good to me. :D
Keep up the great work T.
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(#) Ryudo3 2009-04-23
A very good update. I enjoy how Harry is out smarting Dumbledore. I'm also enjoying how slow harry and hermione relationship is slowly getting together. I also can't wait to see how Malfoy try's to get back at Harry for embarrassing him. Can't wait to see your next chapter.
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