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Guardian Angel
2 reviews“It’ll be OK, you’ll be his guardian angel” I knew that I was going to regret letting him go, but if it was to help him, make him happy then I’d feel good too,
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Dead Roomate
(#) Julianne 2009-05-09
You need to proofread. Please. Or at least get a beta. Actually, go with the latter.
But again, your content is decent.
Hmm... your like a writer who doesn't know how to write. Untrained. A diamond in the rough.
I don't mean to sound as though I'm dissing you; it is normal of me to be this blunt. Sometimes.Dead Roomate
(#) MCRoxsmysoxs 2009-05-10
This story reminds me of an ICP song called in my room.
It's pretty good so far and I agree with the comment above me, I also suggest maybe slowing the plot down some.
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