(#) nadialexandra 2009-05-21'ello, Sas. :)
Ohh, shit. I'm too delusional from a 103.4°F fever to make an actual review. Which sucks.
Anyways, I'm basically lying on my deathbed; and I'm still pumped to read this story. It's so original, so different, so creepy. I love it. I'm dying (no pun intended) to know what's tearing them apart. It just has to be something in the Mansion. I can't find any better explaination. But I'll let it all happen and find out as you go along.
Author's responseNadia, I'm so sorry to hear you're not well! As much as I appreciate the review, you really should be tucked up in bed with a big bottle of water to keep your fluids up.
There will be more to read when you're well!
Take care and, as ever, thanks for the review.
- Hi there Sas,
I'm so into this the description makes me feel as if I'm there. I can feel Mikey's paranoia and the others even starting to come apart.
Why does Ray seem unaffected by it all?
Looking forward to more.
Author's responseHey Moonshyne
Thanks as always for reviewing! I'm so glad you're enjoying it :D
I can't honestly say that I know why Ray is unaffected - I was surprised myself when he said that myself, but I'm sure all will be revealed soon!
(#) frerard_is_love 2009-05-22This Rips!! Its so creepy, and really descriptive. Its like being there really. And i love how it revolves around Mikey, you dont get many storys like that. Keep it up!!
Author's responseI'm really glad you're enjoying it. I know a lot of description isn't everyone's thing, but I thought I'd give it a go - I think it's necessary for this one.
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-05-25How did I miss this?? You need to write more on this! I love a good ghost story.
I like the POV you've got going here too. Can't wait to see what's in store at the Paramour.
That place is creepy btw ... I've been there. There's no way I would want to stay there over night!
Author's responseIt's this story's turn next - I'm going to try to do alternate chapters with Master Of Puppets, but, it depends on which characters shout the loudest!
Thanks for the details on your impressions of the mansion - that will be really helpful!
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