AT this time this file will no longer be updated. i have began the process of rewriting the story. I am sorry for the delay.
(#) DJ32 2009-06-06
I look forwad to the rewrite I liked it as it was. But I hope to enjoy the rewrite soon.
I look forward to the layout and grammar cleanup. I also must say I am very intrigued by this story. It is a rare find and I look forward to more.
this is a very good fic. fun to read.
i look forward to seeing a rewrite. the errors were a bit of a distraction, and cant wait to see the clean version. hopefully with new chapters too.
Great idea, the crossover of steam punk and Harry Potter.
While the steam world is done well, I personally think your handling of the HP world is a little heavy handed. I applaud the anger of Harry over the supposed death of Hermione. I enjoy stories that push him to defeat LV by any means necessary.
Does Harry really need titles, vassals, and ridiculous amounts of money to defeat Voldy? Having Harry become a powerful wizard through hard work is interesting to read, not having it handed to him on a silver platter by the omnipresent butler.
Barring what I said above, I am looking forward to your rewrite.
As the others have said, I look forward to your rewrite..
thanks for the update.
I personally have never read any of the Steam Punk that you refer to. I have enjoyed the chapters that you have posted and i look forward to the rewrite
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