(#) TyphoidKitten 2009-07-05Good story. Pretty original as far as time travel stories go. What is that dark thing he's fighting in his mind? Is it his other self or what? If it was his other self in that universe fighting him, how exactly does that work? Didn't Bella kill him? Cause if that's the case he should have been "back" pretty much right after he escaped. Although I'm not complaining about him not coming back yet, it's rather refreshing. Every other Time travel story has him coming back immediately and sometimes completely skipping over how his other self was "replaced".
You definitely need a beta. But I like the story. Update soon and whatnot.
(#) thegreyone 2010-05-18An outstanding story. Please continue writing. Discover, for us readers, a great way for our Harry to learn beyond the art of war. When returning to school, he should have his own quarters and have his sister also reside with him to provide care and for her protection .... Harry has the means to shorten the war, let him use it, and tell us more...
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