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So Shut Your Eyes
(#) somethingorother 2009-06-07
Yeah! He kissed her!
Poor Bob and Willow. All he was doing was a friendly gesture and Gerard had to keep accusing Willow of trying to sleep with him.
I kinda feel she should just leave so Gerard can see how much he needs her. Though Mikey....
Update soon!!So Shut Your Eyes
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-06-07
I loved how we all found out about what went down with the waitress from her reading his thoughts. Kitchen table! (snort)
I'm glad that you're not making them both just hop right in the sack. It makes it much more believable given both of their back stories. Your character interaction is always top notch ... and the build up of it all keeps everyone reading and anticipating what will happen.
I don't think I mentioned this before but I like how easy it was for Gerard to learn how to either hide his thoughts from Willow or send her a direct message.
Of course the fact that Willow's mind actually went quiet when he kissed her is a key factor. You built it up to the point where she was actually starting to cry it was so intense and then the mid-sentence kiss. Perfect, really.
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