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Inheritance
(#) InuKag 2006-04-03
Watch out for repetative words such as the overuse of the word "suitable" It makes for some annoyances in the reading.. other than that this is pretty good. nice job.Inheritance
(#) InuKag 2006-04-03
plus, If Inuyasha was 18 when he was bound to the tree 50 years prior and hes 'technically' supposed to be 18 because he was basically suspended in time.. (frozen if you will) then how is he turning 125? Shouldnt he be turning "69"? lol
other than that.. i DO like this .. dont take this as rude im just curious about that 'minor' detail.
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