(#) somethingorother 2009-06-27You always have the best and worst ways to end a chapter. You leave a great cliffhanger but I'm dying to find out what happens next!! (I hope that makes sense and not offensive. It's not against you're writing, I'm just so eager to find out what happens next!)
Uh oh!! Didn't Gerard want to stop all this with Willow?
And who is the mysterious object/person/people with Elena?
PLEEEEASE update soon!!
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-06-28I says, "oh Elena was revealing the future to her I think. Like she's meant to be with G and make babies or some shit"
C says, "that sounds logical - but how about that other figure with her that was like barely there?"
I says, "I still think it's someone that's dead that he doesn't know is dead or something ... oh shit wait! maybe it's the chick that Mikey saw at Paramour?"
C says, "ooo"
I says, "HA! guys crotches so give their thoughts away sometimes!"
C says, "Yeah, no need to be a mind reader there. You know there's gonna be some hot sex in the next chapter! it sucks driving with a boner"
I says "lmfao"
- i really really really wanna know what elena showed willow and i wanna know who that other person was im know im going to have to wait but it is literally killing me i was in the cinemas watching transformers and alls i kept thinking was this story lol
great chapter cant wait to see whats next
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-06-28ooh ooh! love it! getting so damn good!
who is the transparent figure beside Elena? is it a ghost that maybe hasn't died yet? erm, no probably not!
and what does Elena want from Willow? to be with Gerard?
oh yeh and hot sex of course!
i love this story, can't wait for more!
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