- Try, "and bite anyone whose report displeased her." I'm pretty sure Nagini's a female snake.
YOU DIDN'T! YOU DIDN'T! YOU DIDN'T! HOW DARE YOU?! Bleh! A curse on the revolting belly-bears! Ptui! Ptui!
Author\'s Response: Voldemort has taken over Nagini in canon; I was referring to Voldemort's observations rather than those of Nagini.Heh. Be thankful that I didn't follow my initial impulse to make it a Captain Planet crossover.
- snicker! Oh the mental image of dozens upon dozens of the featured creatures all going for Voldie's destruction... LOL! Someone ought to draw a comic panel illustrating the second half of this story: would be wonderful to see.
I can't honestly find anything wrong with this story.
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