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Harry Potter and The Power of The Coven
(#) mkb 2009-08-04
An interesting start - a slow, ambient build-up with a cliff edge in this chapter. Can't wait for more!Harry Potter and The Power of The Coven
(#) Elfwyn 2009-08-04
A bit slow to start but it has potential. One question, if Dumbledore now knows for sure that Harry is being abused why isn't he doing something to prevent it? Even if Harry has to stay at the Dursley's a spell on Vernon to stop the violence or one on Harry to protect him should work, if nothing else a third party staying there could deter the Dursley and yet allow the bloodwards to work. To me this always shows Dumbledore at his worst, a total lack of empathy and humanity, and why would Harry want to fight for a world that knowingly lets this happen to him?Harry Potter and The Power of The Coven
(#) smeagol 2009-08-04
Right from the start and as it has been unfolding (I just read all six chapters), I sensed that you have a very good potential story to tell that will allow for some fresh air and dimension to the Harry Potter Saga from an american/witch perspective. Don't worry about the story development as being too slow.
Some of the best authors writing their best work have been routinely criticized for their slow beginnings.
Character development add spice to it.
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