by trollopfop 3 reviewsBan wants to believe Ginji's normal.
Category: Get Backers - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters: Ban, Ginji - Published: 2006-04-10 - Updated: 2006-04-10 - 99 words
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Heh. This is cute. If you're going for funny-cute, then I'd switch out the last line for something a little lighter, like "why they always manage to get the best parking space," or "why thunder booms whenever Genji shouts."
sniffle What a bittersweet story. I really enjoyed it.
I especially liked the last sentence, which added a poignant 'punchline' to Ban's musings.
Hopefully Gin-chan cries less and less now that he has met Ban and isn't lonely anymore. ^_^
Oh God, I love how at first you're skimming along playful-musings-town, then the last line just WALLOPS you. I like the contrast of dark with light. =)
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