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MakubeX has a secret.

Category: Get Backers - Rating: R - Genres: Angst - Characters: Makubex, Other - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2006-04-10 - Updated: 2006-04-10 - 100 words

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(#) Ithilwen 2006-04-10

"One who'd saved him," not "one that" (unless of course, that is the sort of mistake that MakubeX would make).

"Once more" is a bit of a cliche'. Would "one more time" work as well?

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(#) Ithilwen 2006-04-10