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The Lost Music Inside
(#) Moonshyne 2009-08-29
Hi,
I love waking up Saturday mornings knowing that you've updated!!
Well that was an interesting turn of events. Her new friend is the sister of her infatuation.
I like Shanna and feel bad that she has no friends (well now she has one). It's sad the way Bob treats her now, but I guess he has a lot of responsibility with their mom being sick.
Looking forward to more when you get a chance.Author's response
I always update on weekends, most likely cause I don't have a life lol.
Shanna definitely will be an important part of the picture.
Thank you for the review!!
xoxoThe Lost Music Inside
(#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-08-29
Indeed it was an interesting turn of events!
I like Shanna and it seems to me that she's sort of like Desirae. Poor thing - getting picked on.
Post when you can.
F oxox.Author's response
Yes, Shanna kinda reminds of Desirae. Their relationship will definitely grow, and may even be the key to knowing her beloved infatuation (:
Thank you for the review!!
xoxoThe Lost Music Inside
(#) mysilentromance 2009-08-29
That was a splendid idea you had about Shanna being Bob's sister. Does this mean Desirae will learn more about Bob in the near future? Well no matter what, it'll be interesting to see where you take this story.
^^Author's response
Thank you!
Desirae and Shanna will become closer, and it may even lead her to figuring out why he is the way he is.
Thanks again
xoxoThe Lost Music Inside
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-08-29
Aw this was awesome. That was a really good idea to have them be brother and sister. Hopefully her dad won't be all pissy anytime soon... which will unlikely happen. This is an awesome fic, please update soon!Author's response
Thank you!
Yes Shanna will be apart of her life as it goes.
As for her dad, only time can tell if he'll leave her alone.
Thanks again (:
xoxoThe Lost Music Inside
(#) sickly_ill 2009-08-31
Dude, this story is beyond exciting in it's own way. I love this story! It's captivating and enticing. Go figuers! I so knew Shanna's brother was Bob! Anyway, I can't wait for more updates!
XOXOX ANDREA. =} =] =) :} :] :) ;} ;] ;) (ALL SMILIES FOR YOU!)Author's response
Oi thank you! (: That really means alot, so thanks I appreciate that.
Shanna will be a change in Desirae's life. May also lead her to actual talking with Bob.The Lost Music Inside
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-11-08
Forgive my blondness, but what year is this story based in? Marilyn Monroe died a loooong time ago, I think. Well, relatively, that is :)Author's response
Lol. It was based in 1962. She died August 5th (:
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