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• Not Quite

  (#) celerystalksatnoon 2006-05-26

  I like the phrase "scared out of his socks". I like the way it sounds, it makes me happy. The part i really like, though, is that Naruto. Doesn't. Wear. Socks. (anymore?)
  Other than that, the writing style is easy to follow and the story shows promise.

• Not Quite

  (#) Myst 2006-06-11

  Nice chapter.. was nice to orginally there.

  Author's response

  Thanks

• Not Quite

  (#) Shuujaku 2006-07-08

  I like, I like. It's a good start that puts a good spin on Jiraiya "adopting" Naruto.
  
  Write some more, woman~~~

  Author's response

  -_-' I'm working on it! Fool. :P Thanks for the review, Shuu.

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