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What A Catch, Donnie
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The Resistance
Chapter Three: What A Catch, Donnie
“Pete….listen, Do you know William Beckett?” Pete turned bright red. “Of course I know that Bastard." He growled, "He attacked my city! He may have killed my best friends, he’s the one who changed me, I swear if I ever see that pompous tea drinking fool ever-” Donnie’s deep soothing voice broke through Pete’s rant “Yours is not the first city that William has attacked. For years he has schemed and planned the world’s demise. Planned the vampires takeover. He created an empire, a force stronger than any this world has seen, and yesterday he sent it out to destroy.” Pete was stunned, how did this man know so much? Had that bastard William really been planning all the death he had seen last night? He was evil. Pure evil and Pete hated him. “I used to be William’s right hand man, his best friend” Donnie continued when Pete stayed silent. “I went with him everywhere, I gave him advice. I helped him plan death and destruction... and I hated myself for it. But I had known Will for so long, I couldn’t leave him, it was like he controlled me.” Donnie sighed then continued “That is, until he started
changing humans- by human law vampires are allowed to change one person each year, if that
person wants to change, and if the vampire will stay with them to teach and help the newborn.” He sighed again, “But William did not follow rules, he went on a rampage, creating ‘the
ultimate army’ as he called it, and the change killed so many….William killed so many. I watched in horror as he bit countless humans. Men, woman, children.. everyone knows that children can never live through the change. Yet he insisted on biting them! I couldn’t stop him; I was powerless, he would no longer listen to me!” Donnie sounded like he was crying. Jesus, thought Pete, these guys must’ve been close, kind of like me and Patrick….I hope Patrick’s okay, Andy and Joe too. That Damn William! “Yours was the last.” Pete was jolted from his thoughts by Donnie’s speech. “Yours was the last change I allowed, Your screams… they were horrible, the change, I thought it would kill you. Your friend…. Patrick?” Pete nodded, Patrick had kneeled beside him throughout his entire change, listening to him scream… “Patrick, he watched over you with so much sadness, screaming when you did, as if your pain was hurting him, it killed me, it broke my spirit and I ran from Will. He chased after me, for awhile. Laughing and asking what feelings I had for miserable humans. He thought your pain was funny! Every death was a laugh; a joke, nothing to stress over, and each newborn vampire was a member of his army, sent to New York for training, each and every one became a merciless killer. I knew everything he had planned, and after escaping him, I used that information to my advantage." What a catch Donnie. Thought Pete, alone in Chicago with information important to your new enemy? no wonder you ended up in this place. Pete quieted his thoughts as Donnie Continued his story. "Anyone who would listen, I told anyone who would listen all of Williams plans, some laughed and said that vampires knew their place was below that of humans, but most believed me and followed me, forming the Resistance."
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Does anybody think this is lame and i should kick it up a knotch? or should i go die? or are you on the edge of your seat begging for more? hmmm review and rate and more will come, best chapter yet next in my opinion.
Oh, i've posted this story on two sites now, so if it looks familiar, don't worry it's mine all mine i write it, i created it, it's mine! no stealing involved, can't steal from myself can i?
Chapter Three: What A Catch, Donnie
“Pete….listen, Do you know William Beckett?” Pete turned bright red. “Of course I know that Bastard." He growled, "He attacked my city! He may have killed my best friends, he’s the one who changed me, I swear if I ever see that pompous tea drinking fool ever-” Donnie’s deep soothing voice broke through Pete’s rant “Yours is not the first city that William has attacked. For years he has schemed and planned the world’s demise. Planned the vampires takeover. He created an empire, a force stronger than any this world has seen, and yesterday he sent it out to destroy.” Pete was stunned, how did this man know so much? Had that bastard William really been planning all the death he had seen last night? He was evil. Pure evil and Pete hated him. “I used to be William’s right hand man, his best friend” Donnie continued when Pete stayed silent. “I went with him everywhere, I gave him advice. I helped him plan death and destruction... and I hated myself for it. But I had known Will for so long, I couldn’t leave him, it was like he controlled me.” Donnie sighed then continued “That is, until he started
changing humans- by human law vampires are allowed to change one person each year, if that
person wants to change, and if the vampire will stay with them to teach and help the newborn.” He sighed again, “But William did not follow rules, he went on a rampage, creating ‘the
ultimate army’ as he called it, and the change killed so many….William killed so many. I watched in horror as he bit countless humans. Men, woman, children.. everyone knows that children can never live through the change. Yet he insisted on biting them! I couldn’t stop him; I was powerless, he would no longer listen to me!” Donnie sounded like he was crying. Jesus, thought Pete, these guys must’ve been close, kind of like me and Patrick….I hope Patrick’s okay, Andy and Joe too. That Damn William! “Yours was the last.” Pete was jolted from his thoughts by Donnie’s speech. “Yours was the last change I allowed, Your screams… they were horrible, the change, I thought it would kill you. Your friend…. Patrick?” Pete nodded, Patrick had kneeled beside him throughout his entire change, listening to him scream… “Patrick, he watched over you with so much sadness, screaming when you did, as if your pain was hurting him, it killed me, it broke my spirit and I ran from Will. He chased after me, for awhile. Laughing and asking what feelings I had for miserable humans. He thought your pain was funny! Every death was a laugh; a joke, nothing to stress over, and each newborn vampire was a member of his army, sent to New York for training, each and every one became a merciless killer. I knew everything he had planned, and after escaping him, I used that information to my advantage." What a catch Donnie. Thought Pete, alone in Chicago with information important to your new enemy? no wonder you ended up in this place. Pete quieted his thoughts as Donnie Continued his story. "Anyone who would listen, I told anyone who would listen all of Williams plans, some laughed and said that vampires knew their place was below that of humans, but most believed me and followed me, forming the Resistance."
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Does anybody think this is lame and i should kick it up a knotch? or should i go die? or are you on the edge of your seat begging for more? hmmm review and rate and more will come, best chapter yet next in my opinion.
Oh, i've posted this story on two sites now, so if it looks familiar, don't worry it's mine all mine i write it, i created it, it's mine! no stealing involved, can't steal from myself can i?
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