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(#) Dragonstone-pheonix 2009-12-02hey you should really ellaborate on your story a bit more :) perhaps make a plot or something with the next chapter if you make one hopefully you will
I thought it was alright but couldn't really understand what you were trying to achieve but i must admit i did laugh!
Oh btw I'm Australian and I would never cancel bbq day that i have planned ^_-
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