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Fall Out Boy Trail
(#) Warpedchris 2009-09-09
That was very intense,I can't believe Patrick brought Laura up...At this point not sure if Patrick and Pete will make it through this one.I feel sorry for Pete though,and have a feeling things will go downhill for him.As always that was amazing!Please update when you get the time!Author's response
I feel sorry for him too. He hasn't got much left in his life now. Bless him!
I can't say too much about the next chapter, but... you're on the right lines. Things aren't looking too jolly. ;)
Thank you for reviewing again! It's good to know people enjoy it :)Fall Out Boy Trail
(#) areyounormal 2009-09-09
I'm drained!!!
Ok - in order...
Poor Bilvy! Gotta keep that smile under control sometimes - get ya killed.
Pete has completely lost the plot. Reminded me of America's Suitehearts (Why won't the world revolve around me)
But from a casual observer's view, and with all the facts - he must be shredded inside. It's a horribly worded desperate cry for help. So badly worded, no one heard him - not even himself.
And Pete! Patrick's lovely!! (Mind you, in my "I'm Just A Ghost..." story, my new chapter has Patrick refer to Pete as 'the handsome one'!)
I'd have been surprised if Patrick hadn't mentioned Laura to be honest. All of his forgiveness was based on Pete's promises to change and despite everything that Patrick has done to help him, for one perceived slip up, he ends up worse than ever.
Patrick's been made to feel like a fool again and I think the explosion was long overdue.
So now, Pete's got no family, no best friend, possibly no band and, if it hasn't already occurred to him, no home to go back to. Oh, dear... something horrible has just occurred to me. Is he going to do anything drastic?
You can't see this, but I've got my worried face on!
I hope there's more soon and that Bill feels better.
Sas x
ps - it's definitely Bulbasaur, Ivysaur, Venusaur. Bulbasaur is my favourite :)Author's response
Poor Bill! I think he'll feel better in a bit, if he doesn't talk and drinks lots of water. -pats Bill on the head and gives him a big hug-
Yep, Pete is so messed up now. The family thing was the final straw. It's now down to him to sort things out, but we all know that's not Pete! As for doing something drastic?... You're half right. ;) Ah, can't say any more!!
Ta for reviewing! It makes me excited. And I'm already excited cos Derren Brown's on in 45 minutes! Have you ever watched him? That guy is amazing! xD
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