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Shut Your Mouth And Get Down On The Floor
3 reviewsFOB Trail says: Pete's recklessness gets him a lot more than he bargained for. -70.
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Fall Out Boy Trail
(#) areyounormal 2009-09-13
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! You... he... No!!!
Oh, the idiot!! Drunken stupid idiot!!
Drastic didn't cover it!
He'll be okay? Won't he? :'(
Poor Patrick, too! Oh, please don't leave this too long!! I shall worry more than is good for me!!
Loved it so much. More very soon?
Sas xAuthor's response
Poor Patrick indeed! His guilt is probably killing him from the inside out. And poor Pete... might die, might not. Hey, I should write alternate endings! I've already written the ending, but I could always create another one to suit my mood. Hahaha.
There will be more soon, it's all written now! Nearly the end of the story. -sniff- Ta for reviewing :DFall Out Boy Trail
(#) Warpedchris 2009-09-13
Oh wow,I didn't see this coming...That was nothing short of amazing...Poor Pete and poor Patrick they both needs hugs!I can't wait to see what happens next!Update soon?!Author's response
I know, poor boys! Although they'll both be covered in blood so maybe let them have a wash before hugging them! Hahaha :D Thank you for reviewing again!Fall Out Boy Trail
(#) areyounormal 2009-09-13
How the hell have you only got 2 reviews for this???? This is possibly the most exciting thing I've read in ages!!!
Come on people!!!!!!!!!!!! Please review!!!! This is amazing!!
Sas x
Author's response
Aww, thanks! :3 I guess only a certain number of people have been reading from the beginning, and won't really care when an update comes up! I'm just gonna guess the people who ARE reading still like it, and tell me so :)
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