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Overlooked
2 reviewsHinata watches Naruto from a distance, wondering if she'll ever be able to talk to him. Onesided NaruHina. Currently a one-shot, but may be extended later.
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Overlooked
(#) IWCT 2009-09-15
I had a lot of fun reading this. Nice piece of gen fluff. If you have any plans to continue this story I would definitely do so. The writing style was not conclusive enough for a one-shot, though you tried to wrap things up at the end with "Hinata was used to being over-looked." But the information that Naruto is free on Saturday leaves a massive tail dangling that needs to be played with. Have fun with this piece if you have a good idea about what happens next. If not, it's still a great piece of writing with a lot of happy gen fluff to recommend it.Overlooked
(#) Atlanta101 2014-09-05
I hope you will add more to the story. I would love to see what happens next. =D
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