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A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) LyssaLa 2009-10-02
Fantastic! I loved it, as usual :)
Thank god for Patrick, he came at exactly the right time I was like hell yesssss!
But how are Andy and Joe doing, poor andy he was only trying to do what he thought was right....even if it wasn't
Anyway more soon please!! Can't wait for the next chapter :D
~Lyssa
A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) LyssaLa 2009-10-02
Fantastic! I loved it, as usual :)
Thank god for Patrick, he came at exactly the right time I was like hell yesssss!
But how are Andy and Joe doing, poor andy he was only trying to do what he thought was right....even if it wasn't
Anyway more soon please!! Can't wait for the next chapter :D
~Lyssa
Author's response
I have 1/4 of the next chapter already written. i was going to wind it up and leave it open for a possible sequel, but it looks as though that would be a bit unpopular at the moment! :) So, I guess my only option is to keep cranking up the excitement and tension and include what would have been the sequel!
I'm so glad you're still enjoying it!!
Sask x
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(#) Moonshyne 2009-10-02
Hi there Sassy,
Yay for Patrick getting there in the nick of time, of course Pete probably planned it that way.
Beckett sounds like he's furious and why shouldn't he be. He was humiliated once again. It must have been horrible for him to apologize to Brendon.
I wonder what Beckett's plan is to get everyone in his grasp?
Looking forward to more.
Author's response
Hey Moonshyne!
You know, I kinda feel a bit sorry for Beckett. it's all gone horribly wrong and he still has the coven leaders meeting to go to! He has a few days still to pull something back, but can he? He does have a plan, but it's quite a risky one...
Thanks for reviewing, as ever!
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(#) PatbtrthnPete 2009-10-04
Awesome! Yay Patrick KICKED ASS! XDAuthor's response
Yeah, I think Mike must have got the shock of his after-life when he saw Patrick's fangs! I wonder how much in favour he'll be with Beckett now? And how pleased is he going to be to see Brendon back?
Thanks for reviewing!!
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(#) charliexbrown 2009-10-04
Yesssssss! Go Patrick! Ah, the dream team's back :3 But Brendon's back on Bill's side. Uh-oh, I feel a plan coming on... And poor Spencer! Even though he's evil I can't help but feel sorry for him. Haha.
I've still been reading along, but I had a real-life crisis which meant I had very little time to review! But I'll be reviewing from now on, hehe :) Keep writing, it's getting so good!!Author's response
Heya!! Good to see you again. Sorry to hear you've had a crisis. I hope it wasn't anything horrible and that everything is okay now.
Yes, indeed, with Patrick's help, Pete has escaped, but - and here's a teaser - what have they escaped to???
More soon!! :D
Thanks for reviewing!
Sask x
ps - don't know if you noticed, but I've finished 'I'm Just A Ghost...'A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) 182love 2009-10-05
love it!
im not normally a fan of fob vampire stories, but this is really well written, i cant wait for more =]
XxxXAuthor's response
Wow, thanks!! I was doing a bit of plotting last night so hopefully I'll have something ready by the weekend :)
Thanks for reviewing! I'm really glad you're enjoying it :)
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(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-10-23
That was amazing.. and there's still more! But since I'm leaving in like.. less that 15 minutes, I should probably go finish packing :)
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