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• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) pi3142 2009-10-12

  Will you take the time and effort to explain why you will put those particular girls into the Harem? As far as your question goes - I don't think this is the power he knows not.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) kuro_no_Shinigami 2009-10-12

  Nice fic, the plot is a little overused but it never gets old.
  As for the poll why don't you put powerfull witches to choose beside the girls already? After all, he gets the magic from them so they'll have to be powerfull. In the harem I'd like to see a profesor (Sinistra o Vector I suppose).
  Also if he bonds something like say a vampie or a veela does he gets abilities or something?
  Anyway do wathever you like I'm enjoying it so far.
  -Kuro-

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) fangleon 2009-10-12

  hey for harem member a professor make it the rune teacher. for slaves make it cho.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) Dragen 2009-10-12

  Great start to the story mate, I love how Harry found Slytherin's Notebook, I don't think I've seen this idea before and I can't wait to see what you have planned next.
  
  But if you can, I would like it that over time Harry become a real master by controlling his slaves and not make them equles, as there are too many slave stories like that out there and I for one like to see a change it that. It's why I write slave stories where Harry is a true master, and hope to see it here too.
  
  PLEASE update soon

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) Maxtaf 2009-10-12

  Nice. A bit short on the surrounding story, as you go from main event to main event without much personal interaction, and that interaction is a big part of what makes for a good story, as opposed to PWP.
  
  Otherwise, I like it. I'd like to see Gabrielle as one of his 7 bonded. Susan, on the other hand, does nothing for me. She's way too vanilla, and I have to have my extra toppings. Bellatrix, now she would be fun. The bond makes her loyal, but she's still nucking futs. She could be his dominatrix, and teach him how to really enjoy his slaves. Plus, she is extremely powerful, so that would help him. (Maybe that's the draw of Susan - she's powerful. Meek, but powerful.)
  
  Speaking of slaves, if you are really stuck on Ginny as slave (I'd prefer to see her as a bonded), then make her a willing one. Maybe she figures out what he is doing because she still speaks Parsel from second year, and secretly longs for the security of having a master again.....
  
  

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) Jden 2009-10-12

  Well after all this time everything is cliche. Overall I think it's a nice story (smut is never wrong). Pretty good presentation and setup. Looking forward to updates or anything new you might write.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) insanetwist 2009-10-12

  I definitely like the idea of Bellatrix as a bond member, but PLEASE don't put Gabrielle. She's far too young, and every fic involving sex with her makes me... uncomfortable. A young teacher would be pretty good as well, though

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) vechero 2009-10-12

  It might be a cliche, but it never gets old. For bonded girl i like the lesser known Su Li. As for slaves, I don't see why he can't use and lose all the girls he wants.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) jabarber69 2009-10-12

  wow I love your story, and your ideal is awesome....as for harem member what you have is cool, but for the sixth one why not hermione, she is a fox and highly intelligent too....but since you seem to only want her as a slave then at least he will get her, but if that is the case then my vote would be gabrielle delacour for the sixth harem member...

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) dragyn 2009-10-12

  Im going to throw my vote in for the unpopular choice on this community: Ginny as bonded. I happen to like her, but that aside, it is canon that she's a powerful witch. And if the SSS is to help increase his power... It would also be nice if it were voluntary, even the Ginny haters view of her wanting harry at any cost leads itself towards that.
  
  Interested in seeing where you take this.

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