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- That was great! You manage to use one small act of catching fish to speak volumes about the back story of the character. You could have made this into a much longer piece full of reasons and and emotions but I think it works all the better for its brevity.
And I wasn't disturbed at all!
- Oooh, interesting. Have you ever seen a flash cartoon series by the name of Salad Fingers? Your story's protagonist reminds me a little of Salad Fingers. The fish, his "friends" -- does he eat them eventually? He's probably starving if he's keeping the dead fish for company rather than consumption. It doesn't seem like he's very interested in rescue. How long's he been stranded.
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-10-03Ha, and I thought he was gonna bite off that fish´s head while it was still alive. I like the shortness. I find it very impressive how much you managed to convey with a short piece like this: mood, ambience... oh, and true insanity. ;)
Now, this is just a wild guess but did you dare to disagree with a certain trolling batman? I think this story needs up-rating.
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