Categories > Original > Poetry > Bleeding wrist/Bleeding hearts
hmm...out of my impulses and seeing a blade used to make fruit juice...just something that i think cutters would relate to. please r/r!
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Bleeding wrist/Bleeding hearts
(#) MarkPoa 2006-04-14
I liked how the poem flows... until the end. I just don't feel the last line has enough of an impression. The earlier part seemed stronger.Author's response
thanks. i will work on it! :)Bleeding wrist/Bleeding hearts
(#) InuKag 2006-04-28
Being somebody who has gone through the pain and struggle of cutting, the urges, everything, this really was a good short to relate to.Author's response
thank you so much! i'm glad u can relate. i only cut myself once, and then realized not to do it again!
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