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Fairy Tale Ending
1 reviewHe told me that there's no such thing as fairy tale ending...i now don't believe him...i want a fairy tale ending...please r/r!
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Fairy Tale Ending
(#) MarkPoa 2006-04-30
I like the concept and message of this poem. It's just a feeling but, based on the message, I think this can be made longer, stronger... more emotional, I guess. It's okay as it stands now, but you may want to go back to this and extend it. The poem can only get better. :)Author's response
and yet i keep thinking about this! i will revisit the idea...
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