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A Little Less Sixteen Candles, A Little More "Touch Me"
9 reviewsThe guy's girlfriends's are introduced and Gerard run's away but not too far.
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If You Took The Time To Notice Me
(#) BellaBeloved 2010-01-12
okay do NOT say it was crap. as my friend Mo says: "Have faith." the only thing i found kind of... off was the fact that she started crying because Gee moaned a little bit? good chapter tho! cant wait for more!
xoHellsBellsIf You Took The Time To Notice Me
(#) elsa1794 2010-01-12
THANK YOU!! I LOVE THIS FUCKING STORY! THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER!! :P You can call me Elsa for short. :)If You Took The Time To Notice Me
(#) elsa1794 2010-01-13
Can you update the next chapter ASAP?! I can't wait to see what happen next! :PIf You Took The Time To Notice Me
(#) wolf2008lllll 2010-01-13
L-O-V-E IT!!! HOW THE HELL CAN YOU SAY ITS CRAP!?
I dont know how thoses auditionees wanted there characters portrayed; but they seemed great from my point of view.
UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
^_^If You Took The Time To Notice Me
(#) Disenchantedxo 2010-01-13
woooow! thank you for putting me in it! this chapter was amazing lol :) oooh see later on, do i get to play with rays afro?! haha... it's something i've always wanted to do! update soon? xIf You Took The Time To Notice Me
(#) SmashAuthority2 2010-01-13
I don't think this chapter was crap at all. I think the more you write the more you'll improve, so keep going. xxIf You Took The Time To Notice Me
(#) sock_monkey 2010-01-13
I loved this chapter! And you portrayed me greatly :) thank you for putting me in your story. update as soon as you can please. xo-ErinIf You Took The Time To Notice Me
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2010-05-02
I agree with Smash up there :) If you want to see some crap, you should ask me to send some of my old 2004 stuff to you :) Actually, I think it was like, 2006/2007 Lol
But anway, I totally did that lollipop thing on somebody! It's so creepy how it actually works o_O
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