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Patrick's story
(#) thehagensong 2010-02-20
AWW.
AW.
Ish sad.
Poor Trick. :(
I always feel horrid when Trick dies...lol.
Anyway. YAY FOR YOU FOR FINISHING A STORY! :D
I'm so proud. lol.Author's response
I know, right?! I finished a story! And it was a decent one too! I'm so happiee about that. lol.Patrick's story
(#) Clinga 2010-02-21
Patrick is immortal, you can't kill him! D:
ahem You should make a sequel, where he resurrects from the dead...because he's just awesome like that. Yeah. lol.
:PAuthor's response
Gasp. You ish still here. Well, I could do a sequal. Patrick could survive if he doesn't hit his head too hard. I dunno. I might. Thanks for the idea. ^^
But, as for being immortal, I'm afraid he's not. lol. But he is a great singer. I just wish he'd put that guitar down some of the time and concentrate more on singing. Something tells me if he did that, he'd be epic.Patrick's story
(#) xx_eddi_xx 2010-02-23
Okay so you killed tricky. Big deal lol. I think ive killed him hree times in my fics. XD
this is ur first fnised fic? Niceee. Good job. You got a nice style.
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Author's response
First finished fic I'm happy with, yes. :P I mean, I've finished a few others and I've written a few one shots, but they're not that amazing. Thank yous. ^^
And I know, it's not THAT big of a deal. I just feel bad when I kill Patrick. I'd rather kill Pete. He needs to go away. Forever.Patrick's story
(#) xx_eddi_xx 2010-03-03
haha. yes, peter's a dick, but if he went away, there might actually be a patrick suicide.Author's response
Yeah, that is true. Haha. I dunno. I think Patrick would be able to pull through. I have faith. I'd rather Pete be gone. RAWR TO HIM. >< Yeah.
Oh, and I didn't realize what you had said about the style thing.
Thank you. ^^
I'm glad someone likes mah writing style. It changes a lot. >< lol.
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