Vignette-Chrno's internal conversations leading into a conversation between Rosette and Chrno at an unusually quiet lunch hour. Stream of consciousness on my part. Sort of.
This is definitely excellent. I like how you've given Chrno's age its dues-- addressed the fact that he really is ancient and thinks like an adult, even though he behaves like a kid sometimes. You've blended this well.
This is a wonderful story and you kept them beautifully in character. I think it was the little things that really made me love this story (like how she always watches him eat; or how he pinched her). Very well done.
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