Categories > Anime/Manga > Naruto
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Parallels
(#) MeLaiya 2006-04-23
oh man that was absolutely beautiful. I cant believe how well you portrayed the characters and their feelings. This was heartfelt, deep and to me very emotional. I love your work, keep it up and update soon.Author's response
Thank you! The only thing I don't particularly like is how random the sex scene is >.< I did not transition it well enoug :/ but I'm glad you liked it :DParallels
(#) RekkanoKuuryu 2007-01-03
I like the way you wove a picture with your words. Comparing their love-making to the way their souls have been definatly worked for me as well.
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