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Fatal Facination
(#) GoddessFire 2010-03-22
Oooo oooo oooo oooo! So he has feelings for her! Omgoodness! And he is gonna get his ass caught killin people b/c he is gonna get careless! I swear it! Im no murderer but when u act irrationally, shit happenes... And it is almost always not in your favor! Jeez, I feel bad for her b/c she has this inner conflict of what she wants and stuff... I really want to give her a huge hug. But then I feel bad for him b/c he is dealing with the same thing and having the things his dad drilled into his mind when he was a kid... Maybe he just needs a little love....... I am so torn! Ah! I cant wait for another wonderful chapter! Xoxo ~NatalieFatal Facination
(#) SmashAuthority2 2010-03-22
I totally love this story!!!
You describe their feelings so well!!
Update soon! xxAuthor's response
Thank you, I was hoping i was making their feelings well known.Fatal Facination
(#) mysilentromance 2010-03-22
I love how you had Alyn feel two conflicting emotions in this chapter. It was so brilliant!
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