- Fun tidbit: when I got to the line, "He sometimes has trouble just relaxing in his own head without the menace of Shukaku lurking in the corners," I read "hand" instead of "head." Which transported me to a hilarious, dirty dirty place, although not altogether inaccurate, considering where the fic goes. Anyways, yay for embarrassed Kankurou and fumbling-towards-ecstasy Gaara. =D
Author's responseUgh, now I totally want to change it to that >.
(#) BrokenSoul 2008-04-14Haha, that made me laugh. (At the end) Gaara seems like that kind of innocent person and this went along with the real story so well (that's called canon, right? Please enlighten me) that it made it even funnier. The angsty part was rather well interpreted if I must say so. Good job. =D
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