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CH1: The Suha Siblings
4 reviewsWhen he was 10, Harry Potter was declared a Death Eater by his family. 5 years later, he has returned but is he willing to join in the war to help the brother who turned on him? Wrong BWL theme;
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Phoenix Eclipse
(#) Cateagle 2010-04-25
Methinks there had best be a killer backstory to what was revealed in this chapter. I'm most definitely looking forward to more and to seeing why these siblings were proclaimed Death Eaters and ousted and just what games are being played by the different groups.Author's response
Thanks for the review! I'm slowly adding the chapters posted on my ff.net profile. As for what really happened that night, I can say for the most part, you'll be getting hints and glimpses. The actual scene itself will happen very very late into the story. :D
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(#) HallowsNotHorcruxes 2010-04-26
The first chapter was rather confusing, especially since I don't play World of Warcraft. However, something about the main plot, however shrouded in confusion it may be, that catches my eye. I am very curious to find out more, and will continue to read the rest of this story.Author's response
Tell me about it. I was going to start like most other WrongBWL stories, with a really long summary as the first chapter but I was like no. I've decided to tell what happened those first ten years over the rest of the story.
And I don't play World of Warcraft either. :D
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(#) TxA_GunFighter 2010-05-13
Looks interesting, can't wait to see where you take this.
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(#) ROBERT_1958 2010-09-10
Where did the Black phoenix go that saved Shyamal and his siblings?
Why Shyamal and his siblings running out side on a cld night?Author's response
The Black Phoenix isn't a major character but she will be a rare recurring character every now and then.
It's something just for the four of them.
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