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Forever and Ever
(#) AshleyBaby 2010-05-08
you should fix the spacing on this sometimes it gets hard to read..Forever and Ever
(#) Larka 2010-05-09
Awesome chapter!
Poor Anna god I was almost cry I felt so bad. But something isn't right and I will find out soon enough I guess.
I think Claire and Bob would make an amazing couple! Hehe.
Update soon.
Tomgirl567 :D
P.S I loved it! HeheForever and Ever
(#) Paramour 2010-05-09
Hooray! Bob and Claire. How cute. :)
Annnddd fangirl squeal I GOT MY NAME INTO AN AUTHOR'S NOTE!!......ahem.
But in any event, something makes me think that "antiseptic" is not all it seems. I think Mikey knows something's up, too. I pictured him giving Gerard the squinty eyes of suspicion after he vaguely talked about his injury.
AHH poor Anna. No one deserves that. I liked how Gerard stepped into the protective manly role, that made me smile :)
Don't worry about your uber long sentences too much. You'll find that as time goes on, it'll start improving all on its own.
Lovely update, I can't wait to see what lurks for us in the next installment :D
-AllieForever and Ever
(#) shortygirl 2010-05-09
Bob and Claire how cute...
I don't understand why she has to lie to him...
awesome update..Forever and Ever
(#) FamousLastWords09 2010-05-10
So Bob and Claire huh? Yayness I think they'll make a nice couple.
Poor Anna I'm sad about what happened to her but its sounds like she got her revenge on the nasty man. I hope she ripped his man bits off lol
I don't know why but this line made me really laugh “Hey I gotta get back in there to my breakfast or Alicia will eat it.” I think its funny because I know my fella would say something similar about me.
Can't wait for more as usual.Forever and Ever
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2010-05-10
ooh, ooh and wow!
OK so although Anna is sharing some memories with Gerard, she is changing the story and holding some info back. who was the attractive man that saved her and killed the rapist? hmmmm?
and why have they so little time?
and she knew there was blood goddamit! haha! and what did Claire put on the wound?
this is great. roll on the next chapter!
Forever and Ever
(#) icyblue858 2010-05-10
Okay so I read all of your stories and started to read this one a few days ago and just caught up! Of course I LOVE IT! I love all of your stories! I just can't figure out what she is quite yet, I mean I had a few theories but you add something to the mix and it throws me off! Keeps it nice and mysterious! Keep it up and i can't wait for the next chapter!Forever and Ever
(#) aldualma 2010-09-18
so she is not a vampire? what the fuck is she? god i wanna know!
and gerard.. mmmm gerard, i want to sleep in your bunk,.
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