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• Crippled

  (#) Jelly_Belly 2006-04-25

  Please Read and Review. Yes it is short. But it took a long time to get it right. And I'd love some pointers!

• Crippled

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-04-25

  This make a nice point, but it needs more editing.
  
  "It's just that me and my team has more than others," for example, should be, "It's just that my team and I have more than others."
  
  This is from House's perspective, right? His speech is kind of colloquial, but mostly he uses correct American English.

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  Thank you.

• Crippled

  (#) wezza88 2006-05-16

  It was short but sweet! Love it! Need to write more house fics

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  Thank you!

• Crippled

  (#) hide 2006-10-11

  wow that was very interesting and very true. Foreman just doesnt shut up does he?
  ~hide

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