(#) Richardc269 2010-08-22Story isn't that great. It just seems boring is all. All it's doing is telling Canon. Woopty doo. Might wanna do something different. Story is boring and didn't capture my attention, even though I read all 3 chapters.
Author's responseYou do know we can read these reviews, correct? Not only do I find your commentary completely unhelpful (well-rounded criticism is nice. Your review was not.), but it was completely rude. There is no need to whine about a story just because you didn't like it. If you don't like it, why on Earth would you put in the effort to write a rude review? Honestly. Grow up.
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