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Heir of Sword and Stave
(#) manfedmedviq 2010-05-19
How cute, so it will be a Harry/Multi pairing?Author's response
most definitely. I will not tell you who they are but because of the way the programming runs at HPFFA, I was forced to post their identities there if you are curious and want to go lookHeir of Sword and Stave
(#) Maddog 2010-05-19
I have to comment about you statement about hypothermia. I grew up as a pool rat and had 3 older sisters who all were lifeguards, so by age 9 I was well introduced to the concept.
Like the story so far keep up the good workHeir of Sword and Stave
(#) Cateagle 2010-05-19
Well-written chapter that keeps the story flowing nicely while building backgrounds in a subtle manner. That dream most certainly makes me wonder if this is going to be a Harry/Multi pairing and if that dream was a touch of prophecy/precognition. I'm most definitely looking forward to more.Author's response
it mostly certainly will be a Harry/Multi pairing and that dream was indeed a touch of prophecy/precognition. You'll see how it all links over to the girls later on.Heir of Sword and Stave
(#) rb8 2010-05-20
My son is 8 years old and certainly knows the word hypothermia. Granted, he's advanced, but it's not out of the realm of possibility. Keep up the good work.Heir of Sword and Stave
(#) jabarber69 2010-05-20
another nice one....and I would definitely say that what harry did wasnt accidental magic but full on wandless magic even though he doesnt or didnt know about magic until just a few minutes before....Heir of Sword and Stave
(#) rdgale2000 2010-05-20
This looks like it will be an interesting story. It wuold be nice to see how Harry would have turned out if he would have had a kind, loving environment to grow up in with a loving 'parent' to guide him along the way.
I look forward to your next chapter.
rdgale
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(#) Pointer 2010-05-21
Enjoyed the story. Hope you keep it up.
The hypothermia bit would depend on whether he has been exposed to the concept. A few days in the cold would encourage him to learn about it. Hypothermia's a basic concept and he'd run across it quickly.Heir of Sword and Stave
(#) DragonBard 2010-05-26
My only problem with this at present is that you forget to start a new paragraph when you change speakers, so the conversation comes out as a large block of text, which makes it irritating to read.Heir of Sword and Stave
(#) Lepple 2010-08-25
Large walls of text are neither easy nor pleasent to read.
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