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The fox, The niko, and The wolf
(#) quentan 2011-08-29
first off, don't take chaps hostage. second combine the first 3 chaps, cus they're to short. and it seems like it's interesting. again if you combine the first 3 chaps you will have a more reviews. but it's good so far.The fox, The niko, and The wolf
(#) ShadoxPheonix 2013-03-16
hey so far ur plot has drawn me in to ur story however while u have done a good job so far maybe u could make it easier to identify when it is the biju talking and the othersThe fox, The niko, and The wolf
(#) darkhero123 2014-12-06
the plot was indeed short and you couldn't even tell who was talking it was good but I think it is extremely cool
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