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Past and Present Fleeting Together
3 reviewsIf Inuyasha is a demon, then shouldn't he still be alive in Kagome's time? Or did he die before her? InuKag [Lemons to come][CURRENTLY ON HIATUS]!
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Past and Present Fleeting Together
(#) darkener14 2006-04-28
It's a very good chapter, but I suggest going over spelling a little, such as nonchalantly.
Keep the story going though!Past and Present Fleeting Together
(#) InuKag 2006-05-05
Spelling and grammer are of some issue, but its a good chapter, i just can't seem to figure out where you are planning to go with it.. there is no real plot. I suggest maybe making the chapters a bit longer and getting a bit more information within the first few.
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