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• Quantum Magic

  (#) cah11 2010-06-18

  an interesting story you got here, i enjoy your version of how necromancy works better than some of the other fics i have read. Keep up the good work.

• Quantum Magic

  (#) laraq 2010-06-19

  I found the technical/teaching aspects of this chapter didn't add much to the plot and was, all in all, pretty boring.

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  (#) hammerhead 2010-06-20

  I like your story so far I hope to see fumblemore hurt soon as well as TommyBoy get his ass handed to him

• Quantum Magic

  (#) ROBERT_1958 2010-06-20

  Good story.
  
  I have some questions I would like to know:
  
  1) What happend to Hermione Granger
  in her first year at Hogwarts,
  without Harry/Aldrych to save her
  from the troll?
  
  2) What happend to Ginny Weasley in
  her first year at Hogwarts,
  without Harry/Aldrych to save her
  from the Basilisk and Tom
  Riddle's diary?
  
  3) Will Aldrych/Harry get Hedwig?
  
  4) Will Dobby be friends with
  Aldrych/Harry and help him?
  
  5) A good overview of what has
  happend while Aldrych/Harry has
  been away, as well as to what is
  in-line with Cannon and what is
  not in-line with Cannonwould be
  nice to know.
  
  
  
  I hope Aldrych/Harry wipes out Tom Riddle and his Deatheathers in as painful way as he can.
  
  I hope Aldrych/Harry deals with DumbleDORK and he exposes DumbleDORK's controling and manipulative ways.
  
  I hope Aldrych/Harry will be friends with Luna Lovegood,Su Li, Daphne Greengrass, Tracey Davice, Suane Bones, the Delacor sisters, and the Weasley Twins, and any one who can think for themselfs and help fight Tom Riddle.
  
  I feel bad that Nex had to leave Aldrych/Harry.
  
  I hope Sirius Black ges freed soon.
  
  
  Looking forward to the next update.
  
  

• Quantum Magic

  (#) Agrabah 2010-06-26

  I would like to start out with saying that this story has an interesting premise, and has potential to not fall back into the ranks of 'normal superfan stories'.
  
  This is written in such a way that there is room for the plot to develop at a sufficient pace and I like the darker Harry whose moral compass is in no guided by the norm of the society.
  
  I honestly hope that you are not in such a rush to hurry the plot on that he suddenly just goes after Tom Riddle and kills him right away or Dumbledore for that sake.
  
  I find that the best stories are the ones with sufficient build up to the main points in the plot, and this fic has the potential to do exactly that.
  
  I hope you wont let yourself be pressured into letting one person or another play a major role in your story based on what people want to see. Rather I'd like it if you attempted to at make the events as plausible as possible.
  
  For examples, I have trouble seeing the likes of most of the Weasley's, Hufflepuffs, more or less any righteous people becoming friends with Harry due to his current personality. Of course this is still your story and you can bend and twist the plot in such ways that eventual friendships and/or alliances between Harry and such will be more plausible.
  
  All in all I hope you will not become one of the writers who fall in the the pitfall of 'mediocrity' of fanfiction writers. I honestly hope you will do your outmost to make the proceedings of the plot be as smooth and realistic as possible.
  
  Cheers,
  
  Agrabah

• Quantum Magic

  (#) GrantLarceny 2010-09-15

  go harry!!! oh wait its not harry is it?

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  (#) Melrose 2011-03-15

  wow this is one of the best stories I've read, i like how you can describe but not put to much that it gets boring and simply to stuffed.
  
  Definably putting this on favorite stories

• Quantum Magic

  (#) DoomRider 2012-10-19

  should update the story soon man. id love to see who harry meets and makes friends with.

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