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Alfred A History
(#) Shadowglen 2010-07-06
The chapters are short, but the story moves along quickly. Frankly, I'm rather tickled by the premise of the story itself. You have to skew the timelines of the Harry Potter/Batman realities, but really, I find it a pretty cool idea.
Your writing is also pretty decent. Not nearly as bad as most.Alfred A History
(#) Cateagle 2010-07-06
O-kay, 'twill be interesting to know how the man knew he was 'Harry". His statement at tne end of the last chatper had the effect I expected it would and he's probably doing well to avoid problems there. Meanwhile, the recruiting pitch he is getting sounds rather interesting; 'twill be most fascinating to hear the entire pitch.
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