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Harry's been given a new assignment. Head to Forks, Washington to eliminate a bloodthirsty rebel coven.
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Crescent Moon
(#) ykaraka 2010-07-29
I like it, too short for now, but well written, and from what i've seen, a new approach to a HP/Twilight Xover, keep it up, just write longer chaptersAuthor's response
It was short only because it was a prologue. The chapters will be longer.Crescent Moon
(#) brawlingjohn 2010-07-30
Fuck that. Take your gay-assed vampires to ff.net where horseshit like this belongs.
The chapter is too short, the cross-over unlikely, and the characters OOC. Do not WANT!Author's response
The chapter wasn't a chapter, it was a prologue, those gay ass vampires could tear you apart, the crossover is just as unlikely as ANY crossover, and of course Harry's gonna be OOC. Harry's an adult now, you expect him to continue to act like a little kid? FYI, I will be posting it on ff.net soon, once the first chapter is done. Thanks for the review.
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